Sunday, March 31, 2013

Mit3eb ElGalb 13


Mit3eb’s POV:



Madry meta btit3adaaaal hal maraaa! Kilshay ga6ita eb raas hal Lucy!


Adry enha mo ga3da echathib bs Lucy 9arlha 10 sneen 3indena o 6ool 3umerha zaina mo ma3qoola tsawy kil hatha awal ma yat Noura!!!


Ya3ny etha ehya sawat shay ghala6 tgdar tgooly mala da3y tgi6ha bras Lucy!


3al3umoom mo hatha mawthoo3na, ba7jiiz thalaath tathaker 7ag Paris 7agy ana o Laila o Lamees. Etifaqt ma3a Lamees ena hathy bitkoon hadeyat qbool Laila eb kuleyat el 6ib.


I got out my phone and started looking for seats on the Emirate airways when it hit me, I didn’t ask Noura if she wanted to come or if she can come since she has to work.


Waaiih.. as2alha 3ugub ma arid min el duwaneya. Wela chena ehya mataby a9laan …..




Noura’s POV:



“Nahla 7abeebty shnu ga3da tgoleen? Ya3ny shlon kntay tkalmeena shnu taben? mnu?” gumt agi6 khai6 o khai6 many m9adga!


“Noura walla a7ibaa!! O uhwa y7ibny wayed bs Khalid kharab 3alainaa,” she said.


3umry matakhayalt enna Nahla tkalim.. many gadra a9adig!


“Shlon ta3arftaay 3alaih?” I asked.


Makint aby ekhty el wa7eeda e6ee7 min 3ainy, bs magdaar many gadraa ashofha nafs gabel!


Bas bema enha ga3da ti3teref ly lazim atfaham el mawthoo3 o ma a9eer shideeda 3alaiha.


Aby a7awel aqne3ha enha t’hid hal 6ireej..


“Tathkreen lama kint mshtarka eb dawrat ta9weer? Kan uhwa ma3ay o kina kla ng3ad ma3a ba3ath..” she said.


“O shlon ti6awar el mawthoo3?” I asked.


“Kan 3ndna project fa th6araina nakhith arqam ba3ath o shway shway… you know,” she said lowering her head.


“Shkubra? O shisma?” I asked.


“21 esma Nasser AlX,” she said.


I took a deep breath and covered my face with my hands. I honestly don’t know how to deal with this. Aby a7awel awary Nahla enna elly ga3da tsawy ghala6 bs bedon la akhleeha tgalib el salfa 3nad. UGH I don’t know how to deal with teenagers!!


“Enzain o shloon 6a7 3alaikum Khaled?” I asked.


“6ala3 rifeeeeja tikhayilayyy, o elyoom sima3ny akalma o staw3ab enna Nasser rfeeja fa 3a9ab 7aaail o hadadnyyy,” she said as the tears made their way back on her cheeks.


“Shloon? Shlon dara?” I asked. Lazim a3aref esalfa bethaab6!





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Nahla’s POV:


“Nasser magdaar akalmik al7een ana bilzwara!! O my cousin elly gitlik 3anna mawjod!” I said.


“Walaaain hatha meta befiich?” he asked.


“Madryy bs ana lazim asakra al7een,” I whispered into the phone. Khaled was staring at me, its obvious he was getting suspicious.


“Nahlaa tukfain may9eer chthyy!! Kil ma kalamtich glteely lazim asakra!!” he complained.


“Ya3ny shtabeeny asawy? Ga3ed ekhiznyy ashkara 7aas ena fe shay ghala6,” I said as my heartbeats accelerated.


“Malich shighil fee shbesawy ya3ny? Mara7 eyelich o ys2ilich mnu t7acheen!!” he said.


“9adigny mat3aref Khaled!!”  I said.


Khaled… ah khaled kan msabiblyy azma b7ayaty!!! 9ayer china ukhoy bs 3ala mi9akhaa! Elly qa9ib yaby e3aref wain aroo7 o ma3a mnu o laish o o o ….


Madry mnu gayela Nahla 3ala thimitik yalla raqib kilshay tsawee!! La welly e7ir zyada enna marat egooly matroo7een amaken mu3ayana ya3ny na3aaaam shtaaabyyyy


“Ykhaaasy mayigdar esaweelich shay wana mawjood!!” he said.


“Waay faj2a khtifa madry wain raa7!!” I said looking around for a sign of Khaled.


“A7saan khal efukna, elmuhim goleeely meta bashofich?” he asked.


“Haha not anytime sooon,” I said.


“A7iiiib elly etaghalaaa, yubaa wallaa enich ghalya 3ala galby laish t3athbeeny chthy!!” he said.


I instantly smiled; I loved how he made me feel so good about myself.


“Smilaaa 3ala galbiik min el 3athab,” I said as my cheeks flushed.


“Galbik??? GALBIK??? Entay mn t7aacheen??????” I heard Khaled shout behind me.


I jumped and dropped the phone on the floor. My heart started thudding in my chest.


Shit shit shit!!!!!!


Hatha min waain 6alaaaa3!!!!


I can’t breathe!! I CAN’T BREATHE!!!!!!!


“MATA7ACHAAAAAIN??” Khaled shouted.


I felt the hot fat tears stream down my cheeks. Suddenly my vision blurred and my legs started to shake.


I leaned against the wall and started trembling. Khaled took a couple of steps forward and stood in front of me.


“Mnu elly ga3da tkalmeena?” he asked through gritted teeth.


When I didn’t answer, he bent down and picked up my phone. He looked at the screen and read the name.


“Shnu NX??” he asked. I saved Nasser under his initials.


“R-rfeejtyy,” I mumbled. It was soooo obvious that I was lying.


“Tstikhfeen damich? Shayfatny athwal jidamch??” he shouted.


In a quick motion Khaled saved Nasser’s number on his phone “many Khaled wild bo Khaled en ma 6ala3ta, hayyen!!” he said before he walked away with my mobile still in his hands.


I stared into space with my eyes wide. Its funny how your life can change in a blink of an eye.


What if I had hung up the phone when I sensed Khaled’s mysterious staring?


What if I didn’t call Nasser while I was at the gathering?


What if I can get back the last 10 minutes of my life to change my future?


I sat on the floor and started sobbing as the idea of what might happen started to sink in.


Ra7 yethba7a..


O ba3dain ra7 yethbaaa7ny


O yimkin yethbaaa7 nafsa!!!


Akhhh Nahlaaa why are you so stupid!!!!!?


Suddenly Khaled came back fuming. His face was red and his eyes were bulging out of their sockets.


“NASSER AL X??????? ETKALMEEEN NASSSERRRR AL X??????????” he shouted at the top of his lungs.


“Shnieofijd?” I mumbled, I swear I have no idea what I just said.


He walked over to me, grabbed my arm and pulled me up.


“Entay wa6yaa o mo mtrabyaa!!! Entay mo bas shwahtay sum3at el 3ayla! Entaay khalaiteeny akhser wa7id min a3aaz rab3yy!!” he said through gritted teeth. “Hayyeen ya Nahla, en ma3araft shloon arabeeech ma a6laa3 Khaled!!”




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Noura’s POV:


“O bsr3aa radaait el bait Noura 7ady khayfaa madry shbeesawy hatha,” she said.


Nahla ya3ny khalesaw el shabab elly bildeera maligaitay ella rfeej hal ma6fooog!!!


“Khala9 ana atfaham ma3a Khaled layifthaa7na mu nag9een!” I said.


“Mashkora Noura a7ibich wallaah,” she said as she pulled me in for a hug.


“Nahla la7tha, 9ij enny bakalem Khaled bs hatha mo ma3nata enny basa3dech wela rathya bily sawaitee!!” I said.


She furrowed her eyebrows in confusion.


“7abeebtyy entay elly sawaiteeh ghalaa6, o Khaled mayinlaam laih 3a9aab o 9araakh! Lazim tit3alimain min hal dars o tg63een 3elaqtich eb Nasser,” I said.


Her mouth slowly formed a large “O”.


“Shfeech e6al3eeny chthy?” I asked. “E9ara7a ana matiwaqa3t’ha minich umy marabitich 3ala hal kharabee6 ya Nahla!!”


“Noura you don’t understand!!! Mo kharaabee6!!! A7iba o uhwa y7ibny!!!” she said.


“Lo 9ij e7ibich chan taqadamlich! Ya Nahla elly e7ibich mayil3ab eb galbich o ekalmich bil khash wil das!!” I said.


“Ma9adeg!!!! I thought you would understand but you’re just like the rest!!!” she said before she huffed and stormed out of the room.


Wallaa ana elly many m9adga enna my baby sister t6laa3 chthy!!!!




**I KNOWWW ITS SHORTT AND IM SOORRY!! bs wallaa bser3a ketabta o i have a quiz bacher lail7een madarastla fa ed3ooly pls :$ 

22 comments:

  1. LOVEED THE POST!! W shonu ya3nee Mit3eb ma yad9dig noura w ya9adig hal lucy malat 3alyha, and please next post try to make it longer

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  2. Mn zman mu katbah shay bain noura w mit3eb bs a5nag w lucy w dalal nbi shay 3nd noura w mit3eb please !!
    W please 7awli ykon 6wil :( ❤❤❤
    Good luck ❤❤..

    -

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  3. emta da next powsta

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  4. Akthar shaay ba6ee chabdee halmit3eb mn 9jaaa? Wela mn 9jaa? W hal noura lmsechena takser elkha6er 7abebte la mn rayel wala mn ekht:(

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  5. I loved it! Please 7awli y9eer shay been Noura w mit3eb! When are you posting the next chapter? Please soon :(

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  6. Please post soon :(

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  7. AN AMAZING POST FROM A AN AMAZING BLOGGER!!!
    LOVED IT!!
    I'M HATING MIT3IBBB!
    W THE ASS SHA'3ALA!!!!!!!! UGH I'LL KILL HER IF I SEE HER!!
    I HATE LUCEY ZFTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
    tsathbl? she likes a guy b3umr waldha? tmza7?
    NOURA GALBIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII! mskeena! ma t5al9 mshaklha!
    W I think khalid loves lamees! wla?::
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    Oh 9a7 kam 3umr lamees?
    W wait!!!!!! MIT3IBBB AGAIN I REMMEBERED I HATE HIM 5LAA9999!
    "Ba7jz l my sisters w my wife ashouf 3anha ba3dain.. wla 5la9 mub lazm agoulha shaklha ma tbi tsafr..." 3la keaf omk ent? Sso YES I HATE MIT3IB.
    ta3ab 8loobna alla yhdeeh! w enti mt3ba galbiii
    w I LOVE YOU!
    W POST SOON!

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    1. THAANK YOUUUU AND YOURE AMAZING!!!! LOOL ee mit3eb o lucyy e7iroon o noura t3awer elgalb :(

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  8. OOOH MYY GOOD SHLOUN CHETHEE KHALIDD? NA3AM? LAZGAAA!!!! bss ham nahlaa lazem tefham ena ghala6 eli ga3daa tsaweee, oo mit3eb, shsalfetaa? laish ma ye7awel yetfaham, chenaa karehaa!!! BSSS, I loved the post, 7adaa eyanen 7ataa law kan short, eyanin, nafsech intaayy!!!
    your adorable commenter,
    -ghamaaa ♡♡♡♡♡

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    1. eeee nahlaa mbad3aa:: thaaank youuu entayy elly tyaneeneen wallaahh;***

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  9. Please 6wli alposst shwaya :(!! Walla w ana agra ma agdr at7ms a7s al7en b5l9 alpost =)) w ee mnn zmaan mu katba shaai ben mt3ibb w nouura !! W loouceyuu haa4ii i'll kill heerr b3deen hu shfeeh 9ayr maynt7achaa :)!! Emm w bss Loove the posstt*-* - NF

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    1. loool enshallahhh!!! loool ketabt eb the new post ;) thank youu sweetie;**

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  10. Wallah I don't rember eny ktbt comment bl new story kelma aby aktb y9er shay w finally bktb ;p !!
    mit3b ba6 chbdyy !! Y3nne Enshallah mu y9dg lucy w ychthb nora allmskena !!
    W nahla 7ram y3ne A7s khaled y7bha but he Can't show it !! I know shway esht6et ;p
    Post soon beautiful ♥

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    1. laa ketbaay ketbay latkhaleen shay eb galbichh::: loool enshallahh sweetie;**

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